A discriptive writing The Great Sea Rescue

The Great Sea Rescue

It was a cold September morning in 1838. The fog lingered along he cobbled streets of Hull equivalent a veil of damp silk. I walked into a down(p) hut, which smelt of stale tobacco smoke, must(prenominal)y and damp.

at that place was a middle-aged man sitting behind a small desk, his eyes, grizzly and

Piercing, though friendly looking. He spoke in a low husky voice. Can I help you?

Umm, yes, I replied nervously. Im here to sign on the Forfarshire. The man opened a drawer in his desk and took out a book. I merely need your ~e and your position, then you can come a look round the ship

I was so excited. Im Tom, Tom Jenkins, I said, and Im a sailor. As I watched the man write down my lucubrate I noticed that there were some twelve or more sailors who had signed on just like myself: what an commence this was going to be.

Come, young man, Ill show you round the ship. came a stern, strident voice. I turned around and saw a very tall, well-dressed man. This must be the captain of the ship, I thought to myself. I zip to where the man was waiting for me and as I neared, I looked up at his grammatical construction. I then matte more relaxed than I can ever remember for he had the kindest eyes; his face was big, round and weathered. I followed him down an alley, where there were cats scavenging in dustbins move to find scraps of food.

The fog seemed to separate, like someone crack the drapes, then,

I saw it, there it was, The Forfarshire It was a big ship and, connect both sides in the middle, was large red iron paddles. There were scores of portholes...

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A good essay again,,

once again i i think u could have put a bit more effort into the ending- made it more interesting

a good story teller invovles the audience with the characters.

i felt it took a bit too long to take hit and then the ending was quite abrupt but i thought the middle-the main body of the story was magnificento!!

keep up the good work

You did a good job. I liked how descriptive the beginning and middle is. However, the ending came too quick and could have been more descriptive.


Good Job!

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